One possible version:Everything war beuutifil and good excepl Laura.She had broken her promise to Dad.Breaking apromise was as hed as telling a lie.Laura wished shehad not done it.But she had dome it,and if Dad knew,he would punish her.Dad went on plrying softly in thestarlight.He thought she was a good littke girl.At lastLaura could bear it no longer.She slid out of bed,wenoutside to stand beside Dad and told him everything.Hearing what Lara had done.Dod did mof sayanything and Laure walted“wel”he said at last"thanks to the badget.you didn't put youmself indanger.I hardly know what to do,Laura.You see.Itrusted you.It is hard to know what to do with aperson you can'I trust I guess you must be walchod.So you are not allowed to ge out of your mom's sightall dry tomorrow."The next day felt like the langesday of Laura's life,but Laura didn't regret tethng thetruth.She realized that being good was the only way toel at peace with herse道
