One possible version:I was excited and sure that Hanfu adjustments would be simpleand would attract visitors.I raised my voice as the crowd approached.Two hours later,my voice was raw,and I had made no sales,while Clairewas busy with customers.She handed a bag to a buyer and,noticing myfrustration,said,"If you'd like your Hanfu adjusted,my sister can helpyou."I smiled as the buyer glanced at my sign,but she shook her headand walked away.My heart sank.Even with Claire's help,I didn't have asingle customer.Most visitors were in regular clothes.Maybe this was astupid idea.Just when I was about to give up.Rachel.led five girls wearingHanfu to my booth.Rachel said,"The knot you made for me wasbeautiful,and we'd like the same kind of knot for all of us."I'dnever been so happy to tie six sashes and earn money.Best of all,mycustomers were delighted with the results of the adjustments.Thenmore customers came ..That night,Claire smiled,"I'd say todaywas a success.""Me too,"I replied,flashing a big smile.It wasn't justabout business-it was about helping others appreciate the beauty ofHanfu.
